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(E)and accurately as well
在造句时, 较高级词汇 如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。
二、结构造句 与众不同
在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。
1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了 主语 谓语 宾语 结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。
2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.
2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：
3)阿福救了我妹妹。
A: Ah Fu saved my sister.
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.
4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.
3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用 there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色。
5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。
A: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
三、布局谋篇 独具匠心
在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：
Opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
If your essay does not reflect your original and individual work, your test scores may be canceled.
well. Perhaps I ought to come out and see him.
LISE (firmly): NO, THAT\'S NOT A GOOD IDEA, AUNTIE. HE\'S ILL.
UNCLE DAVID: What\'s the matter with him?
LISE: He\'s got a cold.
JANE: He\'s got a temperature.
LISE: Oh, what\'s the use? HE\'S GOT A COLD.
UNCLE DAvID: All right , all right , we can hear. We\'re not deaf!
Text B
The Stolen Smells
Many years ago in another country there lived a poor
student.He had vcry little money. He lived in a very small room over a
A:well，everyone has shown up. Allow me to introduce a new comer to you.This is Janice，my new secretary.
A, together with B, is…
当人们对未来充满希望时，他们不会令生活向暴力与极端主义俯首。
第一段，指出现在的小孩不像以往那样对政治有积极的兴趣，而是回避甚至厌恶政治（People often complain that our generation is politically apathetic），“我”也一样，但是“我”被一件小事彻底改变了（something happened to change my outlook forever）。行文至此，悬念产生到底是什么事情呢？
全篇结构严密，举例非常恰当，充分证明了人的价值不仅仅取决于他的创造量。两个例子一个是曾鼓噪一时的美国安然事件，一个是美国前总统和一个儿童故事书作家的对比，都是阅卷者耳熟能详的。
marks?\"
\"Yes, father. \"
\"And what seat do you have?\" \"Number
twenty-one. \"
\"And how many students are there in your class?\"
\"Twenty-one, father. \"
Several weeks pass. Peter, who is a bad student and studies
very little, brings home the marks of his monthly examinations.
\"How are you getting along in school now, Peter?\"
asks his father. \"Your marks do not seem to be very good. \"
\"I am getting along much better now, father. \"
\"What is your place in the class now?\"
\"Number twenty now. \"
\"Good. Then you are one place ahead. \"
\"No, father. One of the students left the class. His
family moved to another town. \" 。
Spider: 古埃及人把蜘蛛和未来的财富及幸运在一起。中世纪时，人们还把蜘蛛放到胡桃壳（walnut shells）里做成项链，保护自 己不患疾病。蜘蛛丑陋和可怕，蜘蛛在家 中却可以保护你和家人免遭厄运 （No matter how scary and ugly they are, however, having one in your home was considered good luck as the spider would protect the house and family from any misfortune），而悬挂在天花板上的蜘蛛则更预示着财运亨通，钱财滚滚而来。
A rather than/instead of B
试想，他的新生活是多么惬意啊。
Every age, and every culture has its heroes. In some times and places the heroes have been gods or god-like creatures from mythology, or mortals apparently much above the mass of humanity. But today,sports stars, film stars, and political leaders with clay feet have replaced Ram, Achilles, Cleopatra, and Alexander. In fact there are almost no heroes of any age that can withstand our tendency to debunk. There are figures who will always be in the history books, but they won't always be regarded as heroes.
当然，考生在答题纸上没有写作，答题纸是空白，该考生的“作文”一定是0分。
D:How do you do?
新sat阅读的选项对原文的句子改写很多，这对考生定位关键信息产生了不小阻碍，题目中的选项也尤其抽象，所以这时候可以适当使用排除法来应对.
那么，考生如何吸引住考官的注意力呢？对于一个观点，可以使用不同的词汇进行解释、强化。
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