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● SAT作文的字数要求

但是从第一段就可以看出作者重复性的句子太多了，句式缺少一定的变化。

最后一段就两句话，显得头重脚轻。

一般来说，如果你认同观点A而反对观点B，在结束段落不妨顺便提一下观点B也有可取之处，但切记一句话就够了，免得让阅卷者认为你到文章最后在反驳你自己原来的观点，从而造成立场模糊的感觉。

By Muhammad Ali

5分作文的标准是作文具有逻辑性，那么在这一点上，5分作文和满分作文的逻辑性到底区别在什么地方呢？

这样，一个完整的结束段落就形成了。

has some errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics

我们认为，举两个例子比较合适。

第二句，有力地反问（Is this really true？我们在前面第一篇文章的分析中也提到过反问句的威力，希望大家尝试使用。但“把戏不可久玩”，这种反问句在一篇文章中使用频度不宜过高。

在开始段，作者提出自己的观点，如果只有talent而没有motivation，要想获得成功是不可能的（To truly succeed, you need to have at least as much motivation as talent, because if you don't posses the desire to do something, your talent may simply wither from neglect）。接着，作者提到将要讲到的两个例子，一个是美国歌手Jewel的故事，一个是他妹妹的故事。作者在提到自己的观点前，也讲了一些“废话”来丰富第一段的内容。

6分范文：

如果把中心论点作为一个核心，那么应该有几句过渡的话慢慢绕到这个中心点上，但也不可以绕得太远。

One of the biggest recent scandals in the business world involved many executives from Enron. These men were focusedon how much they could produce, on how much money they could make for themselves. To increase their production, they engaged in risky, illegal, and unethical business practices that eventually led to the total destruction of the entire company and ruined the lives thousands of Enron employees and investors. Although the dollar value of these men may have been very high at one time, their current value and worth has plummeted. If we think of value in another sense, with a humanitarian or social slant, it becomes even more obvious that these men now have little worth in the eyes of their peers, former employees, and former stockholders. The Enron executives should have focused on making a quality product rather than on quantity in order to maintain a successful company along with satisfied employees and stockholders.

如第一段的mutually exclusive propositions，第二段的incredible happiness、small amount of exposure等等。

当然，考生在答题纸上没有写作，答题纸是空白，该考生的“作文”一定是0分。

在第一段，如果作者把下面要举例的两个人（Julius Caesar和William Shakespeare）在第一段提及一下会更好。

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