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Ellen Sue Stern, The Indispensable Woman, 1988
【写作语言分析】
一个阅卷者面对那么多的作文，他的时间是非常有限的，据说一篇TOEFL作文的阅卷时间大概是1分钟，一篇SAT作文的阅卷时间最多也就是2分钟，考生所要做的就是取悦阅卷者，不断地强化阅卷者对你作文的良好印象，让他在2分钟内对自己的作文大加欣赏。
所以说，基本的东西都有了，但和6分作文开头比较，这篇作文的开头稍显单薄。
From that moment onward, politics and history became my passions. In school we had been taught that there was no society freer than the United States, but that was only part of the story. By reading about the political struggles of minorities, women, blue-collar workers, and others, I learned that freedom is not something you're given, it's something you have to fight for. And once you win it, you have to make sure no one tries to take it away again. I learned somuch from Mrs. Fletcher that day, and our conversation transformed me forever. I developed an awareness of the world around me, became less self-absorbed, and took a very important lesson from the past: progress begins with people who choose to stand up for what is right. It was like I'd had a rebirth after talking with Mrs. Fletcher, and that is why I agree with the idea that the most memorable days of our lives are those in which we learn something new about ourselves and experience an awakening.
本文能得满分，开头的第一句话起到了很大的作用。因为它用The debate about quality versus quantity就总结出了题目中没有出现的却暗含的争辩“质量和数量，哪个更重要？”
is disorganized or unfocused, resulting in a disjointed or incoherent essay
那么，如何样才能老到呢？
An essay in this category demonstrates developing mastery, and is marked by ONE OR MORE of the following weaknesses:
鲍威尔这句话的核心，不是忠诚是什么，而是讨论“真实”还是“照顾对方的情绪”两者的倾向问题。
是行动还是语言反映人们的真实面目
本段结束时，也就是全文结束时，用了“that is why I agree with the idea that＋重复主题思想”这样的模式进行全文总结，也再次点题，非常有力。
To my detriment1I thought it would be a good idea to watch the movie in order to prepare. For two hours2I studied Elizabeth Taylor's mannerisms, attitude, and diction,hoping I could mimic her performance. 3I auditioned for the part of "Maggie" feeling perfectly confident in my portrayal of Elizabeth Taylor,4however, I was unaware that my director ...
在中间段落，句式可以随意啦！
而且答案已经给出来了那就是“决不人云亦云”。
这说明，我们可以使得我们的写作更地道在句首使用分词、动名词、不定式，使句首丰富起来！
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