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is free of most errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics
在第一段,如果作者把下面要举例的两个人(Julius Caesar和William Shakespeare)在第一段提及一下会更好。
比如这道题,即使你真的认为有永恒的英雄,但如果你的第一反应是有太多的例子可以证明英雄很难永恒,那么,你的论点最好还是写世上没有永恒的英雄。
比如有一篇老托福的作文题,问的是在家吃好还是在外面吃好?
任何一种考试形式的作文都有其特定的评分标准,SAT作文也不例外。但评分标准是无法量化的,所以,对一篇作文的最后打分是依赖阅卷者对该作文的总体印象的。
To me, being an expert means being successful, and achieving success requires lots of hard work, time, and practice. This is true regardless of what you pursue, from running to drawing, acting to skating, teaching to dancing. Yet expertise and success don't come from skill alone. To truly succeed, you need to have at least as much motivation as talent, because if you don't posses the desire to do something, your talent may simply wither from neglect, and people who prove this to be the case include Jewel and my sister.
这与洪堡的名言“事物不重要,态度重要”有异曲同工之妙。
2018邯郸sat提高
本文能得满分,开头的第一句话起到了很大的作用。因为它用The debate about quality versus quantity就总结出了题目中没有出现的却暗含的争辩“质量和数量,哪个更重要?”
能让文章显得变化丰富摇曳生姿。
is limited in its organization or focus, or may demonstrate some lapses in coherence or progression of ideas
One of the biggest recent scandals in the business world involved many executives from Enron. These men were focusedon how much they could produce, on how much money they could make for themselves. To increase their production, they engaged in risky, illegal, and unethical business practices that eventually led to the total destruction of the entire company and ruined the lives thousands of Enron employees and investors. Although the dollar value of these men may have been very high at one time, their current value and worth has plummeted. If we think of value in another sense, with a humanitarian or social slant, it becomes even more obvious that these men now have little worth in the eyes of their peers, former employees, and former stockholders. The Enron executives should have focused on making a quality product rather than on quantity in order to maintain a successful company along with satisfied employees and stockholders.
要么是身边比较耳熟能详的人物。
即这个例子和你的中心观点之间的关系要在正文中体现出来,而不能是纯粹在正文部分讲个故事。
● SAT作文的正文部分
Thanks to one great teacher, I no longer believe that this constitutes real learning. And I have an idea what does. It all came clear many years ago in Mr. Blumgarden's history class.
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