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课程标题：鹤壁sat培训哪个好
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即你的观点并不重要，重要的是你能否找到有效的论据，所以有时候要违背自己的良心。
同时，该段落结尾处也没有重复thesis statement以加强该例子和中心论点之间的联系。
但是也要注意，你最多只能写两页，千万不要说我写满了，但还没有写完，然后举手问考官再要一张纸。
所以尽管存在这样那样的毛病，阅卷者还是手下留情给了3分。
在开始段落，作者首先表明中心论点是这个世界上几乎没有永恒的英雄（there are figures who will always be in the history books, but they won't always be regarded as heroes）。
从语法方面看，个别地方外还算通顺，但和满分及5分的作文相比，作者的遣词造句能力和驾驭句式的能力显得很稚嫩。
An essay in this category demonstrates adequate mastery, although it will have lapses in quality. A typical essay
is limited in its organization or focus, or may demonstrate some lapses in coherence or progression of ideas
Intellectuals in America and abroad have debated over the concept of success in American Culture. Success can be defined quite differently by different people, but few people argue that being successful is not considered valuable. However, some people also advocate the view that something conssidered unsuccessful can also have some value.
在第一分钟让Jack和Rose同时登上船并相识，第二分钟让泰坦尼克撞上冰山，第三分钟让Jack死掉。
我们每个人都认为自己的字体最好认，但事实不是这样的。
如同开始段落一样，结尾段落的写法也是有套路可循的。
首先，第一页答题纸一定要写满，写的太少了（比如就写7、8行），会给阅卷者留下很不好的印象，即该考生缺乏想象力，无话可说。
Assignment: Are there some heroes who will be remembered forever? Or are all heroes doomed to be forgotten one day? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience or observations.
同时，为使语气不那么绝对，作者提到了特蕾莎修女，认为很少有人像她那样在任何时代都会被人当做英雄推崇。
Of course the history books are full of great men and women who are long gone, and no doubt we can all find our personal heroes from their pages. But the dead cannot defend their reputations and so every biography and every film chips away at their greatness. Alexander the Great will never seem so great once we have seen the film.
人的价值取决于其创造的数量还是质量
这会在很大程度上影响阅卷者的心情，当然就会进一步影响到你的最后得分。
一个考生的SAT作文将由两位阅卷者评判。
在开始段落，作者首先表明中心论点是这个世界上几乎没有永恒的英雄（there are figures who will always be in the history books, but they won't always be regarded as heroes）。
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