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To me, being an expert means being successful, and achieving success requires lots of hard work, time, and practice. This is true regardless of what you pursue, from running to drawing, acting to skating, teaching to dancing. Yet expertise and success don't come from skill alone. To truly succeed, you need to have at least as much motivation as talent, because if you don't posses the desire to do something, your talent may simply wither from neglect, and people who prove this to be the case include Jewel and my sister.

接着，作者用哥伦比亚航天飞机失事和越南战争的例子作为自己的thesis statement （As the examples of the recent Columbia shuttle disaster and the Vietnam War demonstrates, events that are not successful still have value）。

之后还会收到通过短信发送过来的分析结果。对对方的分析划分为：暧昧度，惊讶度，集中力，和诚实度。

prefer to do A rather than do B （不能用to do B）

在结束段，作者提到，一个人的价值取决于许多方面，而不仅仅是他的productivity，并且指出了the more we do, the more we're worth这句话其实是错误的。

4. The negative consequences of eating fast food often is increasingly discussed in the media.

3. When someone picks up the phone, you will be using one of the greatest inventions of the modern age.

在造句时, 较高级词汇 如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句 与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了 主语 谓语 宾语 结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用 there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇 独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

(A)created nor profiting

(A)The bite pressure of wolves, harder than German Shepherds

一般来说，审题需要1分钟，确定思路及决定论点和论据需要2分钟，最后还需要2分钟时间对写好的作文通篇阅读校对，以修改一些小错误。

分析：假设额外取出的11颗糖果中有x颗红色，则绿色有11－x颗。要使总共取出的糖果中红色的比绿色的多，则3＋x＞4＋（11－x）x＞6。所以在额外取出的11颗糖果中，最少要有7颗红色的，才能使总的红色糖果数量大于绿色糖果数量。

Christmas is one of the best times of year for awkward family photos

In passage 1,Douglass characterizes Banks's labor policy in Louisiana as…（主旨）

D中的that指代speeds，那么按D的解释就是speeds can exceed two hundred miles per hour，从中文角度讲没有问题，但在英文中，这样的表达很不地道，只能说a car can exceed two hundred miles per hour。另外，D的表达也很唆。

分析：假设Zelda有x张DVDs，则Barry有x＋10张，Gary有2x张。由题意，x＋（x＋10）＋2x＝78alt4x＝68alt2x＝34，故Gary有34张DVDs。

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