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反正意思不能和中心论点冲突,但在具体的遣词造句上应该灵活点。
但是,文章的核心还是要侧重于在失事后美国有关方面是怎么样处理这件事的,怎么样进行深刻反思的,做了哪些事来检讨自己的工作,从中得到了什么样的教训等等。
在这里,我们不再讨论主题句的重要性,而是让大家注意,在SAT高分作文中,有这样一种写法,即在一个段落中,说一个意思,然后用两三句支撑。
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从句意上看,这里应该是个名词结构的平行,平行的成分有三个,都应该是名词。
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B中出现了SAT的大忌being。
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Bingo!
4分作文: Some people would say that something that is not successful does not have any value. I would have to disagree with this statement. Sometimes, things that are not successful still have some value. For example, the Columbia space shuttle and the Vietnam War were not successful, but they had value. Thus, it is true that something not successful can still have value. For instance, the Columbia disaster. Columbia was destroyed in an accident when the shuttle tried to re-enter the atmosphere. This accident was a horrible failure and many people were very upset by it. The value, though, comes from the new way in which we now look at things. Because of Columbia, the space program now know what is wrong. Hopefully, they will change it. Vietnam is also an example of something not successful. We went to Vietnam in an attempt to get rid of communists. Thewar went on for a while, but we were not able to win. Many soldiers were killed and the public were very angry about the whole thing. Soon there were many protests across the country and college students especially became active against the war. By the time the war was ended the people were very upset with their country. These two examples show that something not successful can still have value. As we have seen, both Columbia and the Vietnam War were not successful. Yet, we got something of value out of them. 【点评】 开始段落把中心观点讲出来了,并且也有thesis statement。
最后一段就两句话,显得头重脚轻。
这也是为什么,同样是写个人的成长,有的人就可以拿满分,有的人却不行。因为,我们作为考生要讲的故事,必须要与名言有关才有可能拿高分。
第二段,作者提到Jewel曾经非常落魄,还举了一些细节比如她一度以自己的车子为家(she was living in her car),但是她坚信自己成为一代歌手的梦想会实现。
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Without our past, our future would be a tortuous path leading to nowhere. In order to move up the ladder of success and achievement we must come to terms with our past and integrate it into our future.
顺便提一下,在英文中,有些动词的ing形式已经相当于一个形容词了。虽然它们是从动词派生过来的,但文法上也倾向于把它们看作是形容词。比如interesting和exciting,已经没有人会想到它们是从动词派生的了。本题中的thrilling和aggravating就是这种情况。
对于我们考生,这暗示着什么呢?有两个非常容易被人忽略的事实:
(C)either in music or literature
还有个比较严重的情况,要引起我们的重视。
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