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Assignment: What is your view of the claim that something unsuccessful can still have some value? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and example taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observation.

下面是该作文题的几篇考生作文，并逐一附上评析。

在美国文化中，对于“我”是值得研究的，有进步也是值得欢呼的。

The abolitionists, such as Harriet Beecher Stowe and William Iloyd Garrison,were heroes in their own time. Before the Civil War, people in all sections of the country thought that African Americans。

总之，这篇作文反映了作者深厚的文学功底和广泛的阅读量，全篇文法正确，思路清晰，并展示了相当水准的遣词造句能力。

比如：

develops a point of view on the issue and demonstrates competent critical thinking, using adequate examples, reasons, and other evidence to support its position

作为开始段落，最少要3到5句话才可以构成一个有效的段落，但许多学生往往一两句就匆匆结束，起码从字数上看就不是个成功的开始段落。

在结束段落，作者再次表明自己的中心观点，即很少有一个所有时代都顶礼膜拜的英雄。

The play was Neil Simon's "Rumors," and would get the opportunity to play "Chris," a sarcastic yet witty role, which would be my final performance in high school. In order to develop my character, I planned out her life just as I thought it should be, gave her the voice I thought was right, and the rest of her character unfolded beautifully from there. My director told me after the first show that "Rumors" was the best work he'd ever seen from me, and that he was amazed at how I'd

6分作文：

如果举一个例子，那正文部分就是一个段落；如果举两个例子，那么正文部分就是两个段落。

An essay in this category demonstrates very little or no mastery, and is severely flawed by ONE OR MORE of the following weaknesses:

SCORE OF 6

可见，在主语中可以大胆地使用定语从句丰富句子意思。

书写要工整、易于辨认，不要使用草体字。

2）句使用的依然是定语从句

（A）6

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