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It would be preferable if we did not have to pay such a high price to learn suchlessons. The Columbia space tragety and the Vietnam War both demonstrate how events perceived as failures can still have value.
按照这个套路，任何作文题的开始都可以迎刃而解了。
用一个例子进行发挥，介绍了自 己三个阶段的快乐，层层递进。
其出现的理想位置是段落之首，并且它一般都由两个部分组成：topic＋controlling meaning
这两段文字幽默，但又决不重合现象，因此，非常具有杀伤力。尤其是第三段结尾的一句“I know that's my father's philosophy when my mother poses such questions.”用了两个书面语的大词“philosophy”与“poses questions”，自揭家里的小小尴尬，把阅卷的考官一下子逗笑，高分也就志在必得了。
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（B）7
全文的开头和结尾都非常符合SAT作文的要求，特别是两个例子构成了鲜明的对比，对支持作者的观点起到了非常正面的作用。这篇文章也提醒了我们，尽量举出一些带有对比性质的例子，从而增加文章的说服力，因为是好是坏，是对是错，一对比就看得清清楚楚了。
（B）14
结束段落只有两句话，虽然讲的内容都符合SAT作文要求，但只有上半部分，没有下半部分即“发挥”。
Gertrude, for example, responds to the death of her husband, the King, by remarrying shortly after his death. Rather than dwelling on her new role as widow and theaccompanying sorrow and misfortune that have fallen upon her, she chooses to react by quickly recovering and aligning herself with her former brother-in-law. Given her situation, this is a very intelligent and rational decision, for it provides her with the security of a strong marriage as well as a continued high status as queen, since Claudius has now ascended to the throne. Gertrude positively responds to a negative event rather than letting that event destroy her.
1. Without our past, 强调句式，放在句首表强调；
We were ... "I was.." "I knew ..." "I cound find ..." "I raised ..."，这样一连串以我开头的句子，非常的“自我中心”，应该是要避免的，但在这种记述自己转变教育观念的文章中，这样的句子也无伤大雅。
不得不提及的是，她丈夫在与她分居后不久，于1970年自杀。早在1963年，她就在自己的作品中，对自己的女性身份进行反思（examine her female identity），而她也于1976年，通过自己的引起争议的作品Of Woman Born：Motherhood as Experience and Institution向世人公开了她的同性恋倾向。
An essay in this category demonstrates developing mastery, and is marked by ONE OR MORE of the following weaknesses:
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