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课程标题：2020年长春托福辅导班
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例：I love Mary not because of her beauty but I love her intelligence.
2020年长春托福辅导班
Hearing a number of interesting stories, our visit was thoroughly enjoyable.［×］
知识的特征有两个，第一个特点是它的继承性，即我们不管是与他人交谈，还是看书，或是从老师那里学习，首先要从他人那里得到初始的知识；
【作者观点分析】
但许多同学上来就立即回答问题，如有的考生对该题目会这样开始：I think that we can learn something valuable from something unsuccessful。
New manager: And what about that man there?
新任经理：那边那个男人呢?
Secretary: He is our accountant.
秘书：他是我们的会计。
New manager: I see you have a coffee bar and a water cooler. The staff here must be vevy comfortable. I think it really helps
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这显然不是一个完美的平行结构，因为not only后面接的是一个形容词，而but also后面接的是一个名词性结构，词性不同的成分不能构成一个完美平行。应该说She is not only pretty but also intelligent。
在结束段落，作者先总结了自己的核心观点，并指出以上列举的两个例子可以证明自己的观点，到这里，结尾段落的上半部分就算结束了。
from A to B
比如说：“中国南方没有美女”这个命题，只要能找出某人是美女，而她正好是南方人，那么这个命题就破了。
楼上的诸位见解很高，欣赏！
the only one of those students who is…
阅卷委员会的给分为该篇作文的最后得分。
(A)makes people more dependent
上面谈到的关于SAT作文的开头结尾和正文的写法，是一个行之有效的套路，同学们可以按这个模式去练习，逐步形成适合自己的一个写作方式。
下面我们介绍一篇获得满分的叙述形式的文章： Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.No one is contented in this world, I believe. There is always something left to desire, and the last thing longed for always seems the most necessary to happiness. Marie Corelli, A Romance of Two Worlds Assignment: Do you think that people are capable of finding happiness or are they always searching for something beyond what they have? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and example taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observation. 优秀范文： Happiness means different things to different people. My sister is happiest when she performs onstage in a play. My best friend is happiest when he is pitching a perfect game on the baseball field. People find happiness in all sorts of ways, but that doesn't mean they stop searching for something more. Finding happiness and continuing to pursue other goals are not mutually exclusive propositions. Instead, both of these activities can work together to motivate you, as I've learned from my own experience. When I was in middle school, my favourite class was art and I was disappointed that the class period was so short and only twice a week. Although I was happy during those times, I really missed art during the rest of the week. However, knowing that art class was approaching helped motivate me to pay attention in the rest of my classes because I knew that my "reward" would soon follow. Once we were in the art room and I was immersed in painting or sculpting or drawing, I found incredible happiness in the creative process and carried this feeling with me throughout the remainder of the day, yet I wasn't fully satisfied with this small amount of exposure and I wanted more. I did appreciate the happiness I had, but at the same time I was looking something beyond that. So I begged my parents to let me take art classes after school and on the weekend, I managed to convince them I'd be happier if I could have this additional creative time. Taking more and different art classes outside of school exposed me to a variety of different techniques and media that I never had time to explore in school, like metal-working, wood-carving and print-making. I grew even more enthusiastic about the visual arts and found even more happiness than I could have imagined thanks to these additional classes. By wanting something more, I was able to find additional contentment and inspiration and I truly was happy with the results. Yet I didn't stop reaching for other goals. I really wanted to have my artwork displayed for the public, so I worked very hard for several years to develop a portfolioand I achieved my goal last year with my first solo show at a local gallery. This success gave me much happiness, and I'm already planning additional shows. Being content with my art makes me happy on a regular basis, but this doesn't keep me from wanting something more at the same time. For me, striving for additional goals adds to my happiness, so I don't see the two actions as contradictory at all. Instead, searching for something beyond what you have can help you to appreciate and enhance whatever it is that makes you truly happy. 【点评】 这个作文题问的是，人们能否寻找到快乐，或人们是否总不满足于眼前的快乐？ 在第一段，作者首先说明对不同的人来说，快乐意味着不同的内容，人们可以找到快乐，但不会就此停止。
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